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Posts : 2
Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 27
Location : France

PostSubject: Wily Application ;x   Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:23 pm

Hi all ,

I present my application for become member !

Name : My name is Wily Bingm.

Age : I'm 22 years old. ( I telling the truth. )

Location : I live in France but i speak english , italia and laos ;x.

USGN Account : My Usgn name is Wily

USGN ID : My USGN ID is 100179. ( Yes , i know. I'm new ! )

Why you want become [Die] Member : It's simple. I want help clan , and i help person to follow rules and your server is full of hacker/cheater.

Do you have hacked in serveur : No. I hate hacker.

Your english is good : Yes , it's truth , i speak good english.
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Others : Thanks to have look my topics Guest , goodluck !
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Join date : 2012-08-18
Age : 20

PostSubject: Re: Wily Application ;x   Wed Aug 22, 2012 2:59 am

Hey Willy!
I am glad that you were hoping that I would check out your application, and I would like to thank you for wishing me luck. I wish the same to you Very Happy.

If you don't have time to read the whole message, I left a summary at the bottom Very Happy

Hi all ,
I present my application for become member !
Name : My name is Wily Bingm.
Age : I'm 22 years old. ( I telling the truth. )
Location : I live in France but i speak english , italia and laos ;x.
USGN Account : My Usgn name is Wily
USGN ID : My USGN ID is 100179. ( Yes , i know. I'm new ! )
Why you want become [Die] Member : It's simple. I want help clan , and i help person to follow rules and your server is full of hacker/cheater.
Do you have hacked in serveur : No. I hate hacker.
Your english is good : Yes , it's truth , i speak good english.
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Others :Thanks to have look my topics VOID , goodluck !

First of all, at the first look of your application, I can say that you don't speak excelent english, since you have a lot of grammar mistakes (I underlined all of them), but your english level is good enough for the server's needs. Also, a good idea is to include some facts about your gaming experience (since when do you use pcs, how good are you in gaming etc). Another good idea (i know I haven't done this) is to state how much time you have played CS2D for.

I would recommend that you expand your application with stuff like I am good at .... and I am bad at.... and stuff like that.

Just to help you, here is my application: http://die-clan.pixforum.net/t143-member-mod-admin-application-by-void
Good luck again, and I hope that my advice will help you.


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TL;DR

-Your english is not very good, needs improvement but it's enough for the server needs.
-Add some info about your gaming experience.
-Add some info about how much time you have played CS2D
-Add some facts about your good/bad points.
-To help you: http://die-clan.pixforum.net/t143-member-mod-admin-application-by-void
-Good luck!


P.S. I cannot give you a ranking based on the information that there currently is in your application.
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